helping time
ok . since you used cackletta (who is my second favourite mario villian) i'll help in anyway i can
1) a larger screen and don't make it go too fast
2) the superstar saga style cackletta and fawful sprites should be used for this
3) small messages should go sooner and newspapers should have a continue part just like the text
now i hope these advices will come in handy. i suppose the first one you can't really do without a better flash system